by : Bacardi Gold
02/Oct/2020

floating on the water
moving but getting nowhere
shadow of a man
littered by fire
a shadow coping for a breath
arms struggling
rallying for changes
day should be a day
night should be a night
freeing himself from the aridity of existence
to enjoy life’s abundance
triumph is not a chance
it is in hard work that triggers success…
Loved this. Especially the last two lines are too good!
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Thanks for loving it. I feel happy.
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Great words and we all have to work hard for our rewards in life.
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Thank you so much ! Success needs hard work….
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Triumph is not a chance, agreeing 💯. Well penned! 😊
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Thank you so much !
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Wonderful poem. I am glad you are writing again. Thank you for liking so many pieces of my artwork.
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Thank you so much ! I like your works, and the colors you used, specially the portrait of the dog ! …… It’s my pleasure !
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This is a stunning composition of person and time. Wonderfully written.
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Thank you so much for visiting and your comment. I’m happy for it ! ….Stay safe, Brockelman !
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This is a great blog, my friend.
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Thank you so much, Ed . Stay safe.
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We truly appreciate the things we work hard to achieve.
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yes, appreciating our struggles is the best way to recognize and value our own effort in achieving changes in our lives. ….Thank you so much for your thoughts. …. Stay safe.
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Very good. Be safe.
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thank you so much…
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