
by : Bacardi Gold
09/march/2023
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when no dreams are left to dream
no roads to tread and shadows to follow
no hints of footprints to trace and track
a calm sleep tonight is hard to wish for
will the sunrise wake you up
and greet tomorrow with a wooden smile
a star-gazer in an angry sky tonight
delaying chances is another time wasted
dreams don’t speak when and where to begin
dreamers wait for hell to freeze over
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Well composed verses…though a bit melancholic.
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Thank you so much, Indira …
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The poem may be melancholic, but it is a poem that makes one think, generates pictures in the mind’s eye, and opens up a pondering of exactly what? I think that is the beauty of these words and that we each have the capacity to think about it and draw from it what we will, as well as try to see what you see.
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That’s exactly right ! Thank you so much !
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They are written for me!
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Impressive expressions!
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If you feel it, it comes out . Your heart and mind will guide your pen. . Thank you very much for the positive adjectives, Aish !
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