when i close my eyes
i see a lot
what i hear
what i dream
what i discern
more than i could figure out
the candle light in the dark
is Hope seeking to be pursued
more than anyone could feel
seeing behind the walls
the matters of the troubled past...
when i close my eyes
the right path appears
the footprints that i follow
the shadow that i chase
are the blessed route to trail...
when i close my eyes
the truth comes adrift
what's in my heart
are treasures that i keep
are goodness that i outreach...
closing my eyes
things are seen and noticed
when to draw conclusions
weigh a lot of doubts
decisions are folded...
when i close my eyes
i'm opening a book
an experience appearing to my mind
vividly,exploring the world
scouring the sea and sky
in a quest that will come to be...
It's nice to be back writing again in Wordpress.com. I guess my time will provide me space to breath a little and write a little. This unique moment is pressing me to squeeze whatever little thoughts I have in my brain and share them with you. Friends of all colors and beliefs, please support me for this endeavor as we spread friendship and understanding worldwide.
View all posts by Bacardi Gold
16 thoughts on “I close my eyes”
When we close our eyes, the inner world become more real than the outer world. Beautifully written
An online weblog with quite informative, cheerful and inspirational articles for human beings who love travel to India with ardor and make a distinct Lifestyle.
Triangle Writes... 
When we close our eyes, the inner world become more real than the outer world. Beautifully written
LikeLiked by 4 people
Thank you, kinge ! Yes, the mind becomes far-out unusual. Be safe.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Excellent words!
LikeLiked by 3 people
Thank you very much for the compliment !
LikeLiked by 1 person
Darkness when we are awake certainly throws some light. Beautiful poem!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for liking my poem, Anisha.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your words describe what I feel when I close my eyes. Wow!! Thank you so much for sharing this amazing piece.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much, Shreya.
LikeLiked by 1 person
When we close our eyes, we can dream the way we want to. Beautiful piece.
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thank you very much for the compliment.
LikeLike
I ❤ bacardi
LikeLike
This is so true. When we close our eyes, it’s almost like all the other senses become sharper and try to compensate for the loss of the one. 🖤
LikeLike
You’re right, Shruba. It’s almost a dream when our eyes close. Thank you so much for the words.
LikeLiked by 1 person
So true and deep. Thank you.
LikeLike
If one closes his eyes, he reads his mind and sees a lot more………..You’re welcome !
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes! Our inner self comes out when our eyes are wide shut.
LikeLiked by 1 person