when i close my eyes
i see a lot
what i hear
what i dream
what i discern
more than i could figure out
the candle light in the dark
is Hope seeking to be pursued
more than anyone could feel
seeing behind the walls
the matters of the troubled past...
when i close my eyes
the right path appears
the footprints that i follow
the shadow that i chase
are the blessed route to trail...
when i close my eyes
the truth comes adrift
what's in my heart
are treasures that i keep
are goodness that i outreach...
closing my eyes
things are seen and noticed
when to draw conclusions
weigh a lot of doubts
decisions are folded...
when i close my eyes
i'm opening a book
an experience appearing to my mind
vividly,exploring the world
scouring the sea and sky
in a quest that will come to be...
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13 thoughts on “I close my eyes”
When we close our eyes, the inner world become more real than the outer world. Beautifully written
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When we close our eyes, the inner world become more real than the outer world. Beautifully written
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Thank you, kinge ! Yes, the mind becomes far-out unusual. Be safe.
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Excellent words!
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Thank you very much for the compliment !
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Darkness when we are awake certainly throws some light. Beautiful poem!
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Thank you for liking my poem, Anisha.
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Your words describe what I feel when I close my eyes. Wow!! Thank you so much for sharing this amazing piece.
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Thank you so much, Shreya.
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When we close our eyes, we can dream the way we want to. Beautiful piece.
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Thank you very much for the compliment.
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This is so true. When we close our eyes, it’s almost like all the other senses become sharper and try to compensate for the loss of the one. 🖤
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You’re right, Shruba. It’s almost a dream when our eyes close. Thank you so much for the words.
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