I knocked at your door
I heard a voice
I knocked once more
'Till the voice flee
Outside the house
A playful young crowd
To be with them
They called me
Playing was a child's hour
With fellow children
With the neighborhood
An hour became forgetting
I remembered you
You were sick in bed
Not able to get up
But I can't go inside
The door was locked
The key I can't find
Knocked, knocked, I did
The silence listened
Neighbors lend a hand
'Till the you no more
Angels lifted you
I was a child...
I cried for you
'Till today, Mama
Missing our yester years
I was a child...
And today, I raised
A loving family
Right virtues you taught
Kept them with me
Now, a man of today
Treading the path you've learned
The right one for me, since
I was a child...
It's nice to be back writing again in Wordpress.com. I guess my time will provide me space to breath a little and write a little. This unique moment is pressing me to squeeze whatever little thoughts I have in my brain and share them with you. Friends of all colors and beliefs, please support me for this endeavor as we spread friendship and understanding worldwide.
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Oh no, you didn’t make me sad! It’s ok. Just that the poem is so well written that it gets into you, and that is so special. Very good work. Keep on writing!
"I have enough time to rest, but I don't have a minute to waste". Come and catch me with your wise words and we will have some fun with our words of wisdom.
Triangle Writes... 
This is so beautifully expressed. Loved it. 👏👏👏
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thank you for the praises…!
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It’s my pleasure. 😊🙏
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Omg, this is so emotional… So beautiful. Felt weeping…
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Thank you very much ! I didn’t mean to make you sad, Vaal.Grey… Again, thanks for the coompliment….
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Oh no, you didn’t make me sad! It’s ok. Just that the poem is so well written that it gets into you, and that is so special. Very good work. Keep on writing!
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Thank you, again for the additional compliments…You made me happy ! Be safe. May your week be an enjoyable one.
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